Indiana Jones, Temple of the Wet Treasure

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Well, Still got a crap score on NE on my newest design, just started something new,
Also not a recreational thing, but you get where the idea is from

For now, this screen to show what work needs to be done:

[fuchs]

Well, for my taste you could just play more with the architecture.

I'm sure you will do a great job with detailing it, but i think the buildings themself are built a little too simple.

[MCI]

Fuchs sad it all!^^
A little bit more work on the basic structure of
your buildings would make them so much better...

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Well actually this was just a test how it fits with landscaping and the Black mamba Block, and small houses with bridges, i want to create more diagonal bridges and cross overs and landscaping plays in this project.

Thanks for the comments, the Archy is just simpel for now but the back and the front will be detailed.
But i want to know a few things,

-The windows
-The awnings
-the colour effect on the light brown background,
-And the use of the wooden fences as decorative object.

This is what i was testing out, i not heared any of you can i get a reply on that please

[fuchs]

Well, the colors are nice. But it's maybe too early to say more. Landscaping is also well done, but at the moment i can't find out what kind of theming it is used to be. Maybe it is an african theming? Then i would use some other roofs because those look too european. Maybe you should also remove those brick walls. African houses are typically built from mud (i hope i choosed the right word... ).

So don't take this critic too serious. Everithing is good 'til now, but not perfect.

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I see your point!

I'm going to work on it
And yes it has a Deep in Africa theming

Also i'm going to try a lot of wood then.

[Infest]

I like what i see so far, but the part behind the ride should be a hill and not flat... it looks weird like it is now... also its close to the edge, thats why its reasonable.

colour is fine, in combination with nice foliage (e.g on the hills i would advise you) it would look great.

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good i will try, i want to do some specials on the edge

[fuchs]

Maybe you can get some inspiation for what elements to work with from my African Theming in ! Architecture is simple, but i think objects are well chosen.

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Well, Here is my new Tryout



Also i added some small foliage to give a impression of the Effect

[fuchs]

I still don't like the roofs of the towers. Try something different there, maybe a flat roof with merlons around ( is a merlon ) ore some stuff like that.

The rest has become very good, urely looks like Africa now. Well done!

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I can use wooden roofs, steel roofs leiroofs like this,

What do you think is the best option?

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V.3.0

[fuchs]

Looks pretty good the way it is at the picture.

While placing details, make sure you always got a clear bound between the roof and the wall, looks better when the roof and tha walls got the same colour.

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I'm not placing details, i removed them. The wooden roof is going to be replaced